margarine's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cashing The Check]

far too long

After what seemed like seven minutes of 'Pawn Shop Scene' I had to turn it off. Your dialogue suffers from what I can only describe as prosaic flab, and your voice acting doesn't do it much justice either. Not that I thought the actual 'voices' themselves were bad (although I did have some difficulty understanding 'Smoker' at times), it's just you didn't put enough subtleties in your dialogue, emphasis, and emotion, to the point where it became pretty monotonous.
Whew, that's the bad stuff aside. On a plus, it LOOKED great, you have a real flair for flash. I liked your narrator, and your lipsync was almost faultless. I just hope you read this now, and take it on board.

[Angry Skater & Nasty Dude]

dreadful

Ok, so you were just dicking around with flash? I've no problem with that. But don't fricking submit this crap! And DON'T say it's funny when it's not.

[Curiosity]

hoo

That was fantastic! Short, funny, and to the point. Everything I could ever want from a flash. Do more, many many more

Lyon85 responds:

Thanks! Im looking forward to making a small series, next time il cram more in one flash.
Incidentaly, were both from preston looking at your profile :)

[Absolution]

weee-eeirrd

That was great! Not really David Firth at all, just dark, you know. I really liked your character, he scared my bum off.

Mister-Twitch responds:

I'm glad, but I do pray you'll get that bum of yours right back.

[The Real George Bush]

we-eeell, welly well

Who's your audience here? I see a lot of sort of 'pro-bush' hawooping (um...is that a word?) in these reviews, but I personally wasn't sure whether it was one or the other. Which I guess is a good thing, in one respect, but bad in that I wasn't sure whether to laugh or not. Pro or anti or what, it WAS pretty funny, and I'm pretty sure that's what Bush feels inside.

[PEACETANK]

great!

short, nicely simplistic, and damn well drawn. I wanna peace tank of my own

[S&F Review: Incredibles]

bom bom bom

I thought your rip into Pixar was the best. That short was TERRIBLE. But, yeah, pacing. Needs to be a wee bit faster, because there were moments where it got boring. Maybe if Sceb's character spoke quicker, it'd make a nice contrast to Fred's monkey drawl. And your opening...just have a simple 'da daaa' instead of all that Space Odyssey bull.

JKR responds:

Yeah I agree with you. The Space Odyssey thing will be dealt with soon =)
Actually, it'll be part of the next story/script, most likely where Sceb gets sick of them always playing that music in the begining. Thanks for the comments!

[-Play-]

wow

That ruled! I particularly liked the last part, where your two guys slide out of shot :D Very slick.

[No One Listens]

nice work

VERY David Firthesque, but I won't hold that against you. Some neat visuals, and you put the effort in. I particularly liked the swinging lightbulb, and the scream was effective.
Now...what was it about?