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[Smiles - Like Humans Do]

hm

I can't decide whether I like the song or not. But your flash was well put together. I liked it. And you should do another 'smile' flash..but to one of the songs off the Brian Wilson 'Smile' album! My logic is infallible, you must agree.

Tobunshi responds:

Indeed. But the series is "Smiles", not "smile".

[r0bitz]

hawoop

That was good! I really loved the way your robot guy morphed into other objects (spec. the toaster :P). But, yeah, sound letting you down. Oh, and in the little chase scene your backdrop went kind of wonky. Don't know quite how you'd fix that. If this got tidied up a little, and you got your voices fixed, it'd be a winner.
Good work

BreadFruitLock responds:

You no like toaster :P? Anyhoo, thanks!
Yes, I plan on making anthor one and spending more then 2 days on it. THANKZ YOU!

[Bully FBF]

roundheads

whoo, this ruled.
PS: To stream a sound, go to the 'Instance' icon in the bottom right hand corner and then I think it's Sound and Sync. Um. You'll figure it out. I know I had to. Personally, I'd recommend Cool Edit for song editing.
Keep makin em

Wikk responds:

thx

[I am Canadian (Archived)]

holy crap

I'm not even Canadian and that inspired me!

[Shortflash: Time machine]

interesting

Really well drawn. Just work on your voice acting and get a good storyline (and some music) and you should be away. I'm working on a similar thing, so thanks for the drawing inspiration ;)

[Poor Mister Piggy]

.,'#]

Quite good. Lose the tween when he jumps around though. He looked kind of like he was defying gravity. I'd also have liked to have seen him engulf the planet too, but I guess that's wishful thinking...:(

OzzyMgaow responds:

Actually that bit is frame by frame as is most of it.
Only tweening is with the van and on the sun/mist (although they are very slow)and the credits.
Also very small sections when he was mutating, although most of that was frame by frame too.

Most bits with the guinea pig moving around is all frame by frame.

["The News"]

somewhat predictable

And in poor taste. Poor old popey :(

biblo responds:

poor old popey?

[Flight of the Spaceship]

em

You should have kept the blur song running :) Nice milk though.

DanAbnormal responds:

It wasn't me! The flash film stopped rolling! I think milk hacked into my account and messed it up!

[LC: April Fooled]

well

I think you've been flattered a little with the score. But I suppose it WAS well drawn, and that's generally what counts in the flash portal. Just work on your sound. Sometimes comic stuff like this can be ruined with poor sound recording.

[Terrorism]

hm...a fantasy?

It looked great, and you obviously put a lot into it. However, I wasn't really all that sure what you were trying to say. And I also wasn't too sure about your fiction/reality blend...controversial to say the least. THAT said, if this is part of something bigger, then I'll accept it and hope to get some kind of explanation in your next submission. Your main character fantasising maybe?