margarine's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Papalote++]

BRILLIANT

That was one of the best flashes I've ever seen. Ever.

[MONOTONY]

spot on

Didn't think much of the song though :P I dunno, I think maybe you need music behind the voice. Even if it's just crappy midi file. You should be able to find a 'row your boat' midi file on't google, there's plenty of sad people out there who do that sort of thing. Your voice acting was pretty good. I liked how the kids voices were in fast motion. And you get a 9 for graphics cos they were sweet.
Well done :)

[Tail Chasers]

groovy

Akira has a similar sort of biking sequence. Don't know if you've seen it (I'm assuming so), but it reminded me of that. I liked it though, a lot. Your graphics were immense. Can't wait for the actual episodes to start

[Things]

good

But a little too short. I thought maybe you would go a bit more in depth on the subject, you know, past the obvious mobile, ipod, maccy D culture, and onto the corporate indoctrination behind it - what makes us think we NEED these 'things', why that's bad, etc.
However, I thought it was damned slick. You should make more.

[My GOD, Robots! episode 3]

it's good but

Your scripting and voice work lets it all down. I don't really understand a lot of what's going on, and I don't really care when I do, which is disappointing as your flash skills are so good. My biggest recommendation? Buy a voice mic, and work on your voice acting.

[Stick Vs Human 2]

ACE

That was amazing. And I love Blur. In the sequel, you should take it outside...

[Fake Metal Feelings]

aw

I wouldn't throw stones if I saw a robot. I'd go and hug it, and
spray it lovingly with WD40. But I guess that totally displaces the idea of your movie, so I won't mention it. Oh damn.
Anyway, it was excellent, on the whole. Neat graphical work, and it didn't get boring or anything. I put a three for humour cos I was fully anticipating the 'it would never work. I'm a girl and you're a...robot' line. You can take that as you will.

[To Kill A Clock05 Trailer]

I don't understaa-aand

What are these clock animations? Why do they all have computer voices? Where are the people?! What's going on?!!? AAA
Your graphics were good though. And I liked the music choice. So you get a fair to piddling 7/10 from me.

AntiClockClock responds:

You will learn more when the actual release is out. I am including a Q&A as a bonus feature, so thank you for your questions and your fair review. :)

[Bubble Love]

she was a good woman

That was good! I didn't mind it without sound, I could make up the voices for myself. Make more, it made me feel warm inside :)

[Cashing The Check]

far too long

After what seemed like seven minutes of 'Pawn Shop Scene' I had to turn it off. Your dialogue suffers from what I can only describe as prosaic flab, and your voice acting doesn't do it much justice either. Not that I thought the actual 'voices' themselves were bad (although I did have some difficulty understanding 'Smoker' at times), it's just you didn't put enough subtleties in your dialogue, emphasis, and emotion, to the point where it became pretty monotonous.
Whew, that's the bad stuff aside. On a plus, it LOOKED great, you have a real flair for flash. I liked your narrator, and your lipsync was almost faultless. I just hope you read this now, and take it on board.